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6 Common App Essay Mistakes To Avoid | i've edited 50+ essays

hope you guys enjoy these tips and info about common app essay mistakes to avoid! since ive read and edited so many essays, i thought i would share the knowledge with you guys! see you guys soon :) timestamps~ 1:24 - meaningless metaphors 3:26 - direct statements 4:26 - lack of a catalyst 7:10 - focusing on stuff that's not you 8:41 - excessive use of adverbs and weird descriptions 10:09 - too much repetition business inquiries only- [email protected] background music - girl i want girl i need - nick ward   / girl-i-need